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实例说明托福独立写作首段思路和期间规划

好的初步是成功的一半!在托福考试中,许多学生面临三、四百字的独立写作需求,有了思路,却迟迟不知如何动“笔”,30分钟的时刻一分一秒消逝,文章质量也会跟着心思状况的不一样而受影响,然后影响究竟的托福成果。

为了使学生在有限的时刻以最佳的状况趁热打铁,临场发扬是不可以取的,经过许多考生的亲自验证,咱们发现即便考生英语水平非常好,写作不做任何预备去应考也是风险很大的。因而,考生有必要在考试之前做好足够的预备作业。

已然要预备足够,方方面面的作业都要细究,今日要细究的内容
实例说明托福独立写作首段思路和期间规划插图
是最初有些,咱们将经过一条实例给我们讲一下首段的写作思路和期间规划。

经过一段时刻的备考,许多同学关于独立写作标题触及的论题大约是比照了解了,在进行首段规划说明之前,期望我们思考这样一个疑问:独立写作中所触及的这些论题,为啥会被ETS考官选中,放在一个全球性的言语考试中呢?我们可以再回想一下独立写作的一些标题,他们其实都有一个一起的性质,那就是它所触及的论题和内容,都是我们熟知的,而且会致使我们的谈论的论题,也就是考生们“广泛知晓”,并能“致使谈论”。因而咱们得出托福独立写作标题的两个特征:一是具有“广泛性”,二是具有“可谈论性”。

所谓“广泛性”,就是标题触及的内容我们都熟知,例如,早年有这样一个标题:A/D:The telephone has greater effectson people than television.标题傍边的television和telephone都是我们熟知的事物,最少关于一切托福考生来说,我们都必定是再了解不过的东西了,所以这样的事物呈如今标题中,是具有公正性的;

所谓“可谈论性”,就是方针题所触及的论题有可谈论的价值,如同争辩赛的论题相同,它是可以让正反两边打开谈论的,他的观念是辩证的。

根据这两个特征,咱们总结了一种最初段的规划,这个规划有三有些构成:第一有些——体现广泛性;第二有些——体现可谈论性;第三有些——得出情绪或许文章方案;这儿的第三有些根据我们文章行文思路的不一样而进行不一样的期间收尾就可以了,下面咱们根据这个规划理论来进行一个标题的说明:

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achievesuccessful development of a country,a government should spend more money onyoung children’s education(5-10) rather than on universities.

附和/不附和:为了一个国家的打开,政府应当花更多的钱在儿童教育上,而不是大学教育上。

这是一个教育类的论题,一起触及到政府拨款的疑问,包括两个方面的比照,一个是出资儿童教育,一个是出资大学教育。我们试着将这两个方面总结成一个作业

——the issue of how to invest in education

或许——the issue of educational investment

做完这项作业之后就可以依照三有些的规划写出最初段了。

首要要写的是广泛性:

As is often the case, the issue of educational investment is so muchconcerned that it has aroused a wide discussion.

此句中最初是以as引导的非捆绑性定语从句,as指代的是逗号后边语句中的悉数内容,这件事是常常发生的景象。此句体现了疑问的广泛性。然后就要体现可谈论性了,如何来体现呢,首要,呈现可谈论性的条件,就是因为呈现了差异,咱们可以恰当的过度奉告一下缘由,可如下叙说:

People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at thesame matter from diversified perspectives.

这句话的意思是,因为我们特性和布景方面各纷歧样,所以我们一般从不一样的视点看待同一个疑问。过度之后,进行“可谈论性“的写作:

Some people maintain that investing in primary education is a wise/anoptimum option, while others hold that investing in tertiary-level education issensible/sagacious.

将两有些人的观念进行论说,意图在于经过可谈论性的体现,将标题转化成两边面的观念。之后要做的作业就是期间收尾了,收尾之前也需要进行恰当的烘托Intaking various factors into consideration, 其间take…intoconsideration代表?伎肌敝猓〉庇赾onsider something,之后,根据行文方法的不一样选择不一样的收尾方法,下面给我们两中选择:

——I reckon that elementary education and high-level education areintertwined elements that are playing respective roles in the process of one’sgrowth.

这种收尾方法倾向不偏不倚,后边的行文也多倾向于分情况谈论的思路;

——I reckon that it is the latter/former claim that makes more sense/ bearsmore rationality.

这种收尾方法思路方向比照断定,一般选择立论文的考生会选择。

综上咱们将这篇文章联系汇总如下:

In recent years /As is often the case, the issue of educational investmentis so much concerned that it has aroused a wide discussion. People varying inpersonalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at the same matter fromdiversified perspectives. Some people maintain that investing in primaryeducation is an optimum option, while others hold that investing intertiary-level education is sensible. In taking various factors intoconsideration, I reckon that elementary education and high-level education areintertwined elements that are playing respective roles in the process of one’sgrowth.

(I reckon that it is the latter/former claim that makes more sense / bearsmore rationality.)

我们可以看到,在文中多次呈现初级教育和高级教育的词组,但上文却采纳了不一样的表达方法,primary education对应于elementaryeducation,tertiary-leveleducation相对应于high-leveleducation。因而,向我们偏重一点是,假定在一个期间,或许一篇文章中,咱们不可以避免的会遇到重复意思的表达,这时分,期望我们多多堆集同近义词的短语和词组,用于文章傍边将会显得言语愈加丰厚。

许多考生在学习之初可以恰当的背诵期间和词句,因为前进写作做好的办法就是描画和套用,我们可以将上述期间中的下划线有些看做模板句式,非下划线有些可以根据标题来进行填充。下面咱们使用上述模板,来操练另一道标题:

In your opinion, which one is better, to spend money on something thatlasts for a long time, such as valuable jewelry, or spend your money on shortterm pleasure such as vacation?

花钱买名贵物品仍是去短期休假

首段:

As is often the case, the issue of money spending is so much concerned thatit has aroused a wide discussion. People varying in personalities as well asbackgrounds tend to look at the same matter from diversified perspectives. Somepeople maintain that spending on jewelry is a wise/ an optimum option, whileothers hold that spending on vacation is sensible/ sagacious. In taking variousfactors into consideration,I reckon that material life and spiritual enjoymentare intertwined elements that are playing respective roles in daily life.

由此,这篇文章的首段就结束了,在写作之初,主张我们多多学习范文或模板的写作,但不容无视的是,模板性越强的期间使用性和活络性越差,所以,在托福备考进行到必定程度时,期望我们更多地组成自个最顺手的模板期间或句型,而且多加操练,只需这样,在面临写作标题的时分,才干“临危不乱”地趁热打铁。

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