supportive 撑持的/kind-hearted 热心的/reliable 可靠的/sociable 善交际的/creative 有愿望力的/candid 直爽的/caring 关怀人的/generous 大方的/sympathetic 有怜惜心的/thoughtful 关心的

因而，咱们的topic sentence可以说For me, a good friend should be supportive and humorous. 或许For me, a true friend ought to be thoughtful and generous. 当然，supportive和humorous可以替换成任何描绘兄弟的描述词。

关于第一个主题句，接下来的supporting details可以这样来发扬：First, friends always have many things in common, in other words, they like to do the same things or have similar characters. So, it is no surprise that good friends always support you when you have to make choices. Even though having different ideas, a good friend can understand you and support your choice. Also, a humorous friend can always brighten you up. If you feel down or upset, it’s lucky to have a friend who can tell jokes for you or take you to do some funny things.

关于第二个主题句，可以用以下的话来撑持它：First of all, a thoughtful and considerate friend can make you feel safe and comfortable. When you ge

t sick or get hurt when playing sports, you will forget about the pain and suffering with the caring from your friends. A thoughtful friend also will consider your feeling and well-being when he does or says something in front of someone else. Secondly, a good friend can be very generous when you are in trouble or in need. We can see that many successful people got a lot of help materialistically and spiritually from their friend. Thus, a generous friend may be the key when you are heading for your success.

关于这个论题，修改在给我们带来一篇范文：

There are several characteristics that I think a true friend should have. First, a true friend should be sincere. That means he or she becomes my friend just for me, not for my possession, power or other considerations. And a true friend should be candid, which means when I’m going to do something wrong, he or she would dissuade me and they would not just flatter me but point out my defects. Second, I believe that a friend in need is a friend indeed. When I’m in trouble, he or she is here and supports me; when I’m depressed, he or she would stay with me and encourage me. In addition, a true friend should be reliable enough so that I can share my secrets and feelings with him or her. Therefore, I think these are the important characteristics that a true friend should have.

说道兄弟这个论题，其实可以把他作为明星来描绘，这样换个视点，你会发现，你的兄弟其实有许多的利益，这样你就可以各持己见的说了。

以上就是雅托邦修改给我们奉上的本篇参阅内容，望我们有所收成，有啥疑问等待来和修改谈论哦！